The Oakdale Affair — Inside the Classic
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Abigail was but nineteen and quite human, despite her name.
Upon the dressing table of Abigail reposed much silver and gold and ivory, wrought by clever artisans into articles of great beauty and some utility; but with scarce a glance the burglar passed them by, directing his course straight across the room to a small wall safe cleverly hidden by a bit of tapestry.
How, Oh how, this suggestive familiarity with the innermost secrets of a virgin's sacred apartments upon the part of one so obviously of the male persuasion and, by his all too apparent calling, a denizen of that underworld of which no Abigail should have intimate knowledge? Yet, truly and with scarce a faint indication of groping, though the room was dark, the marauder walked directly to the hidden safe, swung back the tapestry in its frame, turned the knob of the combination and in a moment opened the circular door of the strong box.
A fat roll of bills and a handful of jewelry he transferred to the pockets of his coat. Some papers which his hand brushed within the safe he pushed aside as though preadvised of their inutility to one of his calling. Then he closed the safe door, closed the tapestry upon it and turned toward a dainty dressing table. From a drawer in this exquisite bit of Sheraton the burglar took a small, nickel plated automatic, which he slipped into an inside breast pocket of his coat, nor did he touch another article therein or thereon, nor hesitate an instant in the selection of the drawer to be rifled. His knowledge of the apartment of the daughter of the house of Prim was little short of uncanny. Doubtless the fellow was some plumber's apprentice who had made good use of an opportunity to study the lay of the land against a contemplated invasion of these holy precincts.
But even the most expert of second story men nod and now that all seemed as though running on greased rails a careless elbow raked a silver candle-stick from the dressing table to the floor where it crashed with a resounding din that sent cold shivers up the youth's spine and conjured in his mind a sudden onslaught of investigators from the floor below.
The noise of the falling candlestick sounded to the taut nerved house-breaker as might the explosion of a stick of dynamite during prayer in a meeting house. That all Oakdale had heard it seemed quite possible, while that those below stairs were already turning questioning ears, and probably inquisitive footsteps, upward was almost a foregone conclusion.
Adjoining Miss Prim's boudoir was her bath and before the door leading from the one to the other was a cretonne covered screen behind which the burglar now concealed himself the while he listened in rigid apprehension for the approach of the enemy; but the only sound that came to him from the floor below was the deep laugh of Jonas Prim. A profound sigh of relief escaped the beardless lips; for that laugh assured the youth that, after all, the noise of the fallen candlestick had not alarmed the household.
With knees that still trembled a bit he crossed the room and passed out into the hallway, descended the stairs, and stood again in the library. Here he paused a moment listening to the voices which came from the dining room. Mrs. Prim was speaking. “I feel quite relieved about Abigail,” she was saying. “I believe that at last she sees the wisdom and the advantages of an alliance with Mr. Benham, and it was almost with enthusiasm that she left this morning to visit his sister. I am positive that a week or two of companionship with him will impress upon her the fine qualities of his nature. We are to be congratulated, Jonas, upon settling our daughter so advantageously both in the matter of family and wealth.”
Jonas Prim grunted. “Sam Benham is old enough to be the girl's father,” he growled. “If she wants him, all right; but I can't imagine Abbie wanting a bald-headed husband with rheumatism. I wish you'd let her alone, Pudgy, to find her own mate in her own way--someone nearer her own age.”
“The child is not old enough to judge wisely for herself,” replied Mrs. Prim. “It was my duty to arrange a proper alliance; and, Jonas, I will thank you not to call me Pudgy--it is perfectly ridiculous for a woman of my age--and position.”
The novel opens with a burglar casing a house from behind a bush, noting the family is at dinner and the second floor deserted. The prose draws attention to the youth's 'Sherlockian accuracy' and 'Raffleian purpose,' immediately establishing a tone of playful self-awareness. The burglar, described as slender and graceful in ill-fitting clothes, enters through a French window and uses a private stairway—a detail the narrator notes is 'convenient for retiring husbands and diffident burglars.' This early blend of precise observation and wry commentary sets the stage for a story that treats crime with a knowing wink.
A Burglar's Calculated Entry
The opening chapter focuses on the burglar's methodical approach. He has studied the household's habits, knowing that Jonas Prim can see the reception hall from his dining table. The youth avoids the open front door and instead enters the darkened library, then climbs a narrow stairway to the second floor. The narrator remarks that the stairway has often let Prim 'pass from his library to his second floor bed-room unnoticed'—a detail that hints at domestic tensions. The burglar's confidence suggests 'long and careful study of the contemplated job,' yet his strained expression betrays nervousness. This contrast between bravado and inexperience is a recurring motif.
Voices of the Road and the Town
Later excerpts introduce a character named Bridge, who quotes the poet Knibbs and speaks of knowing 'the road from La Bajada hill to Barstow a darned sight better than Broadway.' His casual, worldly tone contrasts with the fugitives he encounters: a girl who insists she was 'in the car when they killed him' but had nothing to do with it, and a young man called The Oskaloosa Kid. Their dialogue is clipped and evasive. Meanwhile, the rural free delivery carrier Jim spreads news of two murders—old man Baggs and Reggie Paynter—and the disappearance of Abbie Prim. The gossipy exchanges between Jeb Case and Jim reveal how quickly rumor overtakes fact in Oakdale.
Shifting Perspectives and Unreliable Narrators
The narrative jumps between the burglar's stealth, the fugitives' flight, and the townspeople's speculation. Each section offers a different angle on the same events: the robbery, the murders, and the disappearances. The burglar's interiority is limited to physical actions; the fugitives speak in fragments, never fully explaining themselves; the townsfolk rely on hearsay. This structure forces the reader to piece together the truth from incomplete accounts. The excerpts do not reveal whether the burglar, the Kid, or the girl is responsible for the crimes, leaving motive and guilt ambiguous.
Clues in Setting and Detail
Burroughs uses setting to convey character and tension. The Prim house is described with its 'spacious reception hall' and 'mysterious purlieus' that produce 'disagreeable odors and agreeable foods.' The burglar's stolen chauffeur's suit and checked cap are noted as 'ill-fitting,' hinting at his youth and inexperience. Later, the rural setting of the Squibbs' summer kitchen and the Case farm anchors the story in a specific, small-town America. Details like the Ford car, the rural free delivery route, and the mention of Victorville and Cajon pass ground the action in a recognizable geography, even as the plot veers into melodrama.
Because the excerpts are limited to the opening and a few later scenes, readers should approach The Oakdale Affair as a puzzle box rather than a straightforward whodunit. Pay attention to who speaks and who remains silent—the gaps in testimony may be as telling as the statements themselves. The story rewards careful attention to physical details and the way characters observe each other.
The rain softened Oakdale’s edges that afternoon, and Burroughs’ tale of rootless souls—burglar, runaway, drifter—settled into me like the gray light. Later, restless, I picked up Michael, Brother of Jerry, and found the same quiet ache: creatures and people searching for kindness in a world too quick to judge. One book simply handed me to the other. Michael, Brother of Jerry — Background and Themes lingered beside me as the rain kept falling.
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